Orginal

That through and through relation,

Your expressions are back,
which was lane down,

Your cheeriness triggering by your eyes,
Was some thing,i tried to chase for..

That happy smile on your face,
Will never forget to find that back..

Harboring hands on my shoulder,
I was marveling for that feeling ever.

My home was haunting,
until you stepped in...


Now you are back into my life,
I am my original,
Wont let you move easily ,
You are one for whom i crave ever,
My ego is choked,
Wont let you my home ever now,
Please don't think of that now....


I am my original,
Will comfort you ever !
Will love you ever !!

Comments

Lauralee Beth Torchia Provenzo said…
That's such a great picture and a great poem. Hello, I'm just checking out new blogs and found yours and really like it. Feel free to come check out mine.
July 22, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Kay said…
sufficated with love, desire, need of the other, very powerful
July 22, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Arv said…
:)

emotionally packed poetry :)

take care... cheers...
July 22, 2009 at 9:19 PM
Anonymous said…
**Silently pausing for a while to introspect**

What can I say? Wonderful!!! Loved the hyped affection in the sweet verses..

Intense and yet so real..Beautiful!

Keep writing, this was woven amazingly!!
July 23, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Escapist said…
@ Lee Beth ! Pleasure z all mine,will def go through yur note as well.

@ Fiducia A wonderful note of thnkx..looove



joliiieess:-)
July 23, 2009 at 11:07 AM
khaye said…
very nice writing it is very strong...keep it up...
khaye=)
July 23, 2009 at 11:36 PM
Syed said…
How beautiful :) Lovely post dear.
July 24, 2009 at 4:53 AM
AsianCajuns said…
Thanks so much for stopping by our blog! Your poem is beautiful!
July 24, 2009 at 8:05 AM
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