Unforced law...
So dense to get into,
Even not that vivid,
to loop ,
Was so convincing,
Could be life long words,
An eradicate throwing,
Palpating times,
To appreciate the moments.
Strong support around the dunes,
So stoical like a new born baby,
Yelling and throbbing stones,
Something impeded with,
Secure message ,
With folded papers,
Water in force,
Holding those unnamed seconds,
For to be safe ,
And so growing tall meadows,
Erosion been on tips,
Can be massive,
O so fragile it has to be.......
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Read 4 pending posts. Liked Wedding Time very much. All your poems show your depth in writing. Now for a little complaint. You were in Delhi and we did not meet. I feel so hurt. You could have told me on my email id in profile. Sad is not the word to describe what I feel on missing meeting a good writer.
Take care
You from Delhi,
Oh it would had been my pleasure to c u....
I really miss Mr. Jack to meet u...
Nevea mind,there's always a next time..
I may be flying again after a month or so.
Joliieess:)
And i believe i have both characters ......
joliieess:)