Complete breath.


Do every relation mean to be depart ,
And ,
Torn,
The sea minifying,
With every circle,
Falling down....
Stones are bunching to drown,
Water is shrudding its color behind,
The clouds drew a blank,
No more blue in it,
Does that show i cant look for you,
Inside the void,
And where does that jealous going to be,
There is your smile ,
Which i got to see from far,
It not going to remain forever with me,
It's fading..
I dont want to take it in m journey...
I am standing to see you again....

Comments

One Prayer Girl said…
Lovely writing.

Thanks for your comment on my blog.

PG
January 3, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Andrea said…
You truly have a gift. Very deep and heartfelt poem.

Thank you for all your sweet comments on arise 2 write.

Blessings, andrea

PS: I have a prayer request on arise 2 write.
January 3, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Kay said…
extremely heart felt
January 4, 2010 at 1:10 AM
Ravisekharan (a) Ravi said…
That was an awesome one... :) You've got a good space out here.. :)


Regards,
Ravi.
(http://j-ravi.blogspot.com)
January 4, 2010 at 6:27 AM
Yamini Meduri said…
hey Dreamer

nice Write up..loved it actually...!!!

Happy New year friend...!!!
January 4, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Wanda's Wings said…
Beautiful writing. Thanks for dropping by my blog.
January 4, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Just Be Real said…
Very nice. Thank you for sharing. Blessings.
January 8, 2010 at 2:13 AM
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