Under those hidden words !


I had that in my mind,
we could sing the tale,
With the conditions ever,
Where those captured words,
Or was way to lie forth,
Have the directions blown away,
That run on the lone alley,
Reminds of the trials we did,
For that love,
Could the word impossible DIE,
For us,
To be together,
Stones had burst,
It can remind of gentle touch,
Digging of words for love,
So in delima,
To leave the relation,
Far,
Or there are some hidden words,
Yet to be motivated,
For us,
Crossed all those lines drawn for earlier one,
So u have been my light,
To all the new days,
And now if you take that support,
From my shoulders,
Will be shreded,
Please take out some words out soon
For us,
I want to you and me togther.....

Comments

Just Be Real said…
Beautiful and powerful words. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you and yours!
bard said…
Yes, very beautiful and emotional... I hope your wishes come true.
Ajai said…
Only a girl could have written that. It was emotional through and through. Nice one. :)
swati said…
that was thoriughly intense..
Goodday!
Escapist said…
Ajai :- oh thanku...


jjolliieess:)
Pramoda Meduri said…
well expressd one... keep up the good work..
Jon said…
if only words could be taken out like that... like taking books from the library...

and if only pasts could be reworked like that...

to build the todays we always wanted...
Gautam Anand said…
feelings galore ... and emotions flow .. thru ur words..

Anyways .. inviting u to comment on my new poem ..
Marinela said…
I love your line of thoughts,thanks for sharing.
Real Awesome one... Feels like a fresh coffee... :)

Regards,
Ravi.
Raj said…
wanting n having r 2 different things all together. and cuz u want it doesn't mean u r getting it.
very touchy dat but a tad dissappointing.

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