Waited...

Waited long ,
For the day to come,
Enriched  the strength,
All through made those dreamz,
Beauty and peach,
Was all standing,
Fingers crossed,
Just on the peak of mountain,
The rushing air ,
Reviewed my mind again,
Those moments to come,
And the moment went,
As if it was just a blow,
Even couldn't feel the soft flush,
Left in tears.....Again.
Just promised me to be back.....

Comments

bard said…
Although it is tinged with sadness, you have beautifully captured a moment in time....
November 23, 2009 at 7:50 AM
Jack said…
Escapist,

I agree with bard. But why is it that most of your poems have sadness?

Take care
November 23, 2009 at 8:39 AM
Escapist said…
@ Jack----i guess wen ever i jot something i am in -ive thoughts and i dnt know y that happens to me..
November 23, 2009 at 8:53 AM
Kay said…
a cycle I know all too well...
November 23, 2009 at 9:32 PM
RHYTHM AND RHYME said…
Such beautiful words, poetry is all about ones feelings at the time and to be able to express those feelings into a poem.
Most enjoable to read.

Thanks for your visit to my "World" much appreciated.
Yvonne
November 24, 2009 at 1:13 AM
Ajai said…
nice one...has a sad tone. but well sometimes for good poetry u need to be dark. so kudos to u. :)
November 24, 2009 at 10:03 AM
Escapist said…
@ World of poetry and Ajai---thnku for dropping up here.

Joliieess:-)
November 24, 2009 at 11:03 AM
Ritika said…
kudos to ur melancholic tone..

beautiful..~~
November 25, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Escapist said…
@ritika...m great full to you.....

Jollieess:-)
November 26, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Umesh Agarwal said…
very beautiful indeed...people forget that there is beauty in sadness as well and you've done a magnificent job of expressing that..:)
November 28, 2009 at 5:06 AM
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