Few more steps.


Those few steps,
Ahead,
So made the miles difference,
Those few steps,
Too close to comfort,
Those few steps,
So the house is built again ,
Those few steps,
And the ashes were found,
Those few steps,
Waves looked rejoining,
Those few steps,
Area was flooded,
Those few steps,
The long life..

Comments

Andrea said…
Just a few steps at a time!
Great Poem..
Blessings, andrea
January 23, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Escapist said…
@ Andrea --- thnkx.....

Jolliieess:)
January 24, 2010 at 12:53 AM
Arnav said…
Nice :)
it is a few steps that make all the difference :)

Keep Writing and Smiling :)
January 24, 2010 at 3:33 AM
Indrajit said…
tgat ws precisely done and ya a few steps do matter a lot.

:) keep goind.
January 24, 2010 at 4:23 AM
Escapist said…
@ Arnav-----
Yes they matter when you get into it..



jolliiieess:)
January 24, 2010 at 4:26 AM
Escapist said…
@ indrajit---yes they do....

Gud to c you here...


jolliieess:)
January 24, 2010 at 4:27 AM
Raj said…
a few steps is what makes you the sky and me the earth. fictitiously, heaven and hell.
January 24, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Escapist said…
@ Raj--- yes...anything cam change..just in few steps.

joolliieess:)
January 25, 2010 at 6:12 AM
Tomz said…
it seems that you have briefed the story of humanity in a few lines..
January 25, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Escapist said…
@ Tomz i tried to ,but ther are so many steps yet to define...



jolliieesss)
January 25, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Grant-Grey Guda said…
This is truly fantastic!

बहुत बढ़िया मैं इसे प्यार करता था!
March 1, 2010 at 12:06 PM
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