WHATS THE REALITY.

I asked you ,
To show the way of veraciousness,
My eyes retrieved only,
Bunch of flowers,
I asked you,
To be faithful,
My eyes retrieved only,
Gathered hapiness,
I asked  you,
To show me the basic nature,
My eyes retrieved only,
 Jovial person,
I asked you,
To show me your care,
My eyes retrieved only,
The beautiful fay,
I asked you,
To show your love,
My eyes retrieved only,
The princess of tale,

I asked you,
To show me your perfect colors,
My eyes retrieved only,
The colors of rainbow only,
I asked you,
To show the hardness of your heart,
My eyes retrieved only,
The soft petals of flowers,
I asked you,
To show the reality of world around,
My eyes retrieved only,
The beautiful dreams i ever had,

I asked you,
To show me opaque way,
My eyes retrieved only,
The fantasy world,
I asked you,
To show me what actually YOU ARE,
My eyes retrieved only,
My pure soul,my mirror.......

Comments

Oh !
These fake life sucks your upcoming life,so you should know your partner well before going into knot.
You have explained it in a very beautiful way...

Cheers
Syed said…
That ending is so beautiful. Hope you're having a lovely day dear :)
Anonymous said…
Beautiful!!
Well written, the feelings of a heart in seek of answers...:)
Nice read...
Hope your eyes always retrieve the best only!
Keep writing..:)
thank you for visiting my blog and commenting on my post. i am glad you liked it. are you a poet. if so, then you are very talented.
N J said…
There is magic in those words... I could see through them and it appeared so transparent to me... Very very true verses they are...
Rikkij said…
Hmmm..was he just showing what he thought you wanted seen? What an insult! Implies shallowness and denseness. The truth will show anyway. always does. Loved how you wrote this. Like a trap perpetually springing. ~rick
Kay said…
oh my! not expecting that at all...lovely!
Natalie Suarez said…
very very beautiful poem. :)

xoxo

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Yellow Tulip said…
wow...beautiful dear:)..very imaginative and i hope u'll always be happy:)...loved the last line specially:)..very nice
swati said…
very soothing verses dear..
n very pure!
"I asked you,
To show the hardness of your heart,
My eyes retrieved only,
The soft petals of flowers"
God bless ya!
prettyneons said…
your blog is so pretty (:
peace&bows...
prettyneons X
Escapist said…
@ ALL !!!

So thankful.....



Keep writing to me.


Jollieees:-)

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