Table with love.


That was part of surprise,
Standing back of the door,
With pink attire,
A beeded necklace ready,
Every void filled with scent,
Fresh  drops trickling on rose petals
The music was set,
Just a moment was to come,
Cozy table,
With a cushion,
Fingers crossed,
A new hair style,
Ambiencie was perfect,
It took me to the most precious days,
Dinner was just the reason,
With candles up,
The table is all set for love....
That cuddle which i want to see again,
A time where we can relax...
Hands crossed......

Comments

Jon said…
cool poem!

lots of layers and potential for these words for me as a reader...

hope you're having a nice holiday season!
December 26, 2009 at 3:31 PM
steveroni said…
First time here. Reading posts like yours are what keep me "young"...and I mean that.

Thank you.
December 26, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Suvi said…
hello ma'am!..
another interesting poem!..
may i ask you something?
was it pain or love you are dreaming about??..
:)
December 27, 2009 at 12:21 AM
Escapist said…
@ Steve---welcome to my blog and thanku for such a wonderful comment.

Jollieess:)
December 27, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Escapist said…
@ Suvi---full of love..no space for pain..


Jollieess:)
December 27, 2009 at 9:10 AM
Karishma said…
Well I do hope it was as perfect as you described it to be :)
have a Happy New year!
January 4, 2010 at 12:23 AM
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