Romance language....

I was in his arms,
Nothing to look for mre,
We were just into each other,
Nothing more to survive,
He hold me tight,
So do i close my eyes,
No boundaries over to think,
Had the ultimate springing,
Had the strong shoulder,
To put on,
No thought whirling,
The sun was shining,
Or must be the stars,
Can it be moon light,
Coz i  was no more me....

Comments

V. Archana said…
Lovely write thr. :) and loved ur template.. background.. :)
February 1, 2010 at 6:32 PM
bard said…
What a beautiful moment you have described... where you ego disappears into another.
February 2, 2010 at 12:20 AM
Escapist said…
@ V.S.A :-

Oh welcum to my page...
thnku..


jolliieess:)
February 2, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Escapist said…
@ Bard---- you here after long time...

Moment for disappearing of ego is right here....



jolliieess:)
February 2, 2010 at 4:15 AM
Jack said…
Escapist,

Total bliss is the language of romance.

Take care
February 2, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Jaunty anima said…
*sigh*
This was a treat..real treat of poetry!!
Beautiful!!!:)
February 2, 2010 at 8:43 AM
N J said…
It was really good to read from you after a while. Nice work there. Liked the new theme. Cheers!
February 2, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Tomz said…
nice love poem..but have to keep on spelling errors
February 2, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Escapist said…
@ anima---oh after pretty long time...

thnku....


jolliiess:)
February 2, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Escapist said…
@ Nj----yeah u here after break..
hope u doing well..



jolliieess:)
February 2, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Ravisekharan (a) Ravi said…
Dat was ultimate... Awesome one. :)
Tc.

Cheers,
Ravi.
(http://j-ravi.blogspot.com)
February 5, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Escapist said…
@ Ravi----thnks for your support.


jolliiees:)
February 6, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Grant-Grey Guda said…
Truly Wonderful! It's amazingly written!
March 1, 2010 at 7:44 AM
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