In and out bricks.


Thats holds good for me,
Stretching a graph of depression,
Verses the line of happiness,
Up...Down , Up...Down ,Up...Down ,
Blue merging down,
Grey making its new shine,
Those tiny hair cracks getting involved,
Rust recrudesce its area,
Slipping off was accompanied,
Voids were see through now,
Catchment area increasing with null identity,
Corners were filleting,
 Migrants could be seen capturing the new town,
No more originality,
Hollow depths  ,
Up...Down , Up...Down ,Up...Down ,

Comments

Andrea said…
Blessings and prayers,
andrea
April 14, 2010 at 1:10 PM
transparentnow? said…
Up follows down and then repeat...that is the cycle of life. You said it well.
April 15, 2010 at 5:13 PM
Jack said…
Escapist,

It does hurt when you see those unworthy taking over what you admire.

Take care
April 16, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Escapist said…
@ transparent- Yes,cycle of life is so..but at certain it only goes in one direction...ad it all gets messed.


Jolliieess:)
April 16, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Escapist said…
@ Jack - But its not under control to make sure what you see and to what you over come..


Jollieess:)
April 16, 2010 at 10:03 AM
Anonymous said…
Oh come on it looks like you shagged and wrote this poem

see through
slip
hair cracks

what are we supposed to imagine. Is there anything left to imagine?

I pray that you get your love.
April 16, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Unknown said…
how beautifully you have captured the ups & downs of life!
glad to have stumbled upon you...
April 17, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Anonymous said…
I apologize.
I pray that you get your love soon.
April 17, 2010 at 7:36 AM
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