Stilted.


Lived in a town,
So simple and calm,
Drank flowing water,
Clear and lucid,
Fresh air to breathe,
Soothing and refreshing,
Played with birds,
Joyful and independent,
Bathed in lake,
Reviewing and pure,
Fall on brown soil,
Virgin and scented,
Clothed descent,
Covered and extended,
Talked innocent,
Child like and cute,
Helping hand habit,
Caring and sharing,
Lived loved,
Handling and palming,
Was i lived till i was 20 years,
I had different life ahead,
Lived in palace,
So noisy and artificial,
Drank pure water,
Mixed and tasteless,
Perfumed air to breathe,
Hitching and choked,
Played with toys,
Offending and piquing,
Equipped washroom to use,
Conditional and insalubrious,
Fall on carpet,
Used and victimized,
Clothed heavily and costly,
Vulgarity and disquieting,
Talked mature,
Discussions and bad words,
State-of -art living style
Introvert nature and cunning,
Lived fascinating,
Suffocating and conking,
Was i lived after my 20,
In a so called crazy living.....................

Comments

MothSmokeLover said…
So true. Life's get uglier as we age.

Nicely done!
Anonymous said…
Beautiful!
Loved the contrast in lives then and now..:) Amazing concept..and an ever awesome pic to match it..!
Neat and niche...:) Gr8 work!
Keep writing..:)
One Prayer Girl said…
First, thank you for commenting on my blog and welcome. When someone who reads me comments or becomes a follower then I get a chance to meet them.

My life is lived in the reverse of your blog. My earlier years were the lost years and now my older years are magical and I pretty much know where I am.

Again, welcome,
PG
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swati said…
wow!!that was lovely
the way you have demarcated the actions performed before n beyond an age is remarkable..
keep writing dear
take care!
blogrolling you :)
Ms Hen's said…
What a beautiful Blog. What beautiful words..

Thank you for visiting my blog.. for now I get to read such beautiful poems ..

Ms. Hen
Seeker said…
Beautiful words, lovely picture.
A great blog.

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Keep in touch if you feel like it.

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