Lonely way ....

That orange sand,
Shows your way to heavy dunes...
That gray sky,
Sure to say you, blues are all in......
That horny way,
"Think again you are alone " is what do it express........
That smooth road with fresh tarmac,
Is that its never been foot prineted before..........
Heaps around, Life is long-winded to show you the humps of adversities.....
The diminish sunlight,
Gives  you warning of red light ahead......
That shadow far away,
makes you remind of some fake relation.....
And that desert,
which want to put across that you are with out water .....
Was i always same ,
Or i had some one shoulder to shoulder............
I hardly can locate that relation,
Whose smell i cannot make now.........
That manner is hidden down in..
Trying to grimace that old memories ....
Are they washed away ! Or am i just devising my flash ......to be what i dont want Or what i can have...

Comments

Anil Sawan said…
i read it twice and this thought flashed in ma mind "if ur expression is this complicated, how complicated would be ur mind now?"

i read it five times now and its beautiful!
Lenaa said…
very beautiful!

xx
Italo said…
Ciao Escapist, bei versi. Nice poem, as always. :)
Monica said…
Are you the author? Great work, it's so beautiful.
Escapist said…
@ sawan iz it really complicated !!

@ Lenaa ,Italo------Thank you !

Monica ----Yap i'm ,so nice of you.



Joliiieess:-)
Anonymous said…
WOW!
I see that most of your poems embraces color as one of its elements..
Any particular reason?
This one was awe-inspiring, seeing life from the eyes of a lonely soul deserted alone in place..
Wonderful, as each sentence took the breath off me...trying to put myself in those verses..
Nice one..
Keep writing so beautifully!!
Beautiful blog! Thank you for dropping by mine. Have a wonderful day.
MothSmokeLover said…
Oh this is beautiful :)
Maria said…
These are lines which suck you in and whirl around in your head awhile - one can read it again and again.....

Hi, nice to meet you. I've been to your city!
Lovely. :) You are so talented. I appreciate great poetry because I'm not very good at it myself, so thank you for sharing!
~PakKaramu~ said…
Pak Karamu reading and visiting your blog
Escapist said…
@ gaelikaa ! so nice of yuh .......

Hmm.....gud to hear that you been to my city ! I love my city...


Joliiieeesss:-)
All Is Whole said…
So looks like, you cannot see buildings around...You are in deep - long desert..... :)

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