Fantasy or what !!!!!!!!

Portray in the mind,
Was a big world,
With edifices surrounding it,
On the top of it,
Was me,
Wearing that pink dress,
Looking through ,
I could see azure........and hush clouds....
Surrounding me,
With lot of unheard things,
Following each other,
It was me only,
And it was cascading on me,
I couldn't cogitate on it,
Wanted to be it like same,
No wake up alarm,
I wanted to lay on hammock,
It was so nonchalant,
All purity,
Love making its all ways,
So serene and stoic,
Leaving nerve-racking border far away,
Out of all ,may be that was Serendipity for me,
Was that me or some wraith,
I made out,
Something was good was in the offing,
And i was on the anvil,
Mad sure to give it wings,
yeah i was in the castle of air,
Made sure that my eyes wont open........
Wont open,
let me be in my dreams.........

Comments

Anonymous said…
The Pic so beautifully falls in sync with the nostalgic verses...
Neatly flowing lines exhibiting one's mind in poetry!!
Amazing.. I enjoyed reading it thoroughly..
Keep writing..:)
August 9, 2009 at 12:59 AM
Kay said…
oh, yes, yes indeed
August 10, 2009 at 1:27 AM
Anonymous said…
Thanks For The Comment. I needed some juice to kickstart my blog.
August 10, 2009 at 12:16 PM
Viji said…
Nice Poem...Took to to a drammy world:-)! Anyways, Dreamz are b'ful na:-)
August 10, 2009 at 10:37 PM
Anonymous said…
hmmm.. wow......

dis pic enlights your poem..

enjoy your own dreams..
dreams are really really b'full and makes life joy full :)
August 11, 2009 at 9:40 AM
nazia said…
Oooo Miss Dreamer ,this really shows that yuh are still in your b'full dreams..
August 11, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Femstar2000 said…
This is really nice, and ht epicture is gorgeous ♥
August 18, 2009 at 1:43 AM
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