Ring.

Had a first date,
Friskiness,
I tried to express,
I had lot to tell,
Certain things throwing together,
Dreams had no ends,
I had the feeling ,
Which i cant put down,
Words were not decent,
I was getting feeble,
Even was perspiring,
I tried lot of ways,
I'm not able to portrait the feelings,
Didn't want to let the time go,
There were things to speak,
But i was numb,
Seizing with teeth my nails,
I wish i could tell you all,
This was what i had in dreams,
I wish i had you before,
No doubt ,
This is start as well,
Oh ! the ring ceremony,
He pecked on my forehead,
I was wondering,
And in seconds,
Took a word from me,
To say,
That's beautiful,
In turn i heard something back,
No the ring is not beautiful you made it so,
That moment was cherished,
It was 27 Feb'2008............................

Comments

KASHMIR-THE PARADISE said…
Oh that reminds me of my engagement day !!!! that was some what same would you have jotted down, i liked the concept of poem.....

"BEAUTIFUL"


Cheers(-.-)
September 7, 2009 at 11:36 AM
Andrea said…
Beautifully cherished moment captured in this beautiful poem.
Blessings, andrea
September 7, 2009 at 12:17 PM
Kay said…
May there always remain a first for you :) beautiful (again)
September 7, 2009 at 9:43 PM
Yellow Tulip said…
beautiful:)...wish u to have more n more moments to cherish:)..beautiful poem:)
September 7, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Syed said…
Awww what a sweet poem :) Love it.
September 8, 2009 at 5:50 AM
Unknown said…
Is it right to say...
"No, the poem is not beautiful. You made it so." ? :)
love the poem
September 8, 2009 at 9:39 AM
Escapist said…
@ lancelonie .....i am so thankfull to you..

joollieess:-)
September 8, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Liz13 said…
"No the ring is not beautiful you made it so"

that line is so beautiful too!
September 9, 2009 at 8:16 AM
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