Deep in thought

Was so lost,
Couldn't even see the colors around,
Was so lost,
Tried to find myself,
Was so lost ,
Knew the world is freezed.
Was so lost,
Walked around,didn't knew the actual way,
Was so lost,
Difficult to look for a lone star,
Was so lost,
My tears fall was unnoticeable,
Was so lost,
Just a blink , and lost in dreams,
Was so lost,
Didn't think will it be long relation,
Was so lost,
I couldn't look better for me,
Was so lost,
Calm places looked crowdy,
Was so lost,
Heard every tale,
Was so lost,
Where was end ,looked hard,
Was so lost,
I cant even see the way ahead,
Was so lost,
That it seemed nothing has end,
Was so lost,
Never knew what was i thinking,
Was so lost,
Dreams trickling down ,
Was so lost,
Lost all relations,
Lost what ever i had,
Who knew it would be,
Fake relation.................







Comments

Yamini Meduri said…
Nicely written dear...hope this never happens to anyone..!!!
October 8, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Kay said…
do you have the globe that sees straight into my life? i am lost right there in those lines today. Sincerely relatable and beautiful written
October 8, 2009 at 2:47 PM
Escapist said…
@ Kay ....oh loadz f thankz......
October 9, 2009 at 1:07 AM
Pramoda Meduri said…
hayyyoo.. am sorry abt the heart on the suffering side in this poem ..

Very nicely and inspitinglyy expressed...i join with my sis yamini to say that it would or it should not happen to any one...
October 9, 2009 at 5:36 AM
Unknown said…
Fake relationships will lead you to nowhere. Yes, you'll be lost!

Beautiful poetry! :)
October 10, 2009 at 12:12 AM
Escapist said…
@ pramoda..these were just words flying out to jot on...so did i ...and i hope it doesn't reveals any one's life....


Joliieesss:-)
October 10, 2009 at 4:23 AM
workhard said…
Very upsetting tone.. but well written

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October 10, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Priya Joyce said…
ahhh..beautiful....wth lotsaa emotions...

:)
October 10, 2009 at 7:36 PM
Michael said…
Whoa, I love your poetry. It's so... isolating and dark. I really like it.
October 10, 2009 at 10:19 PM
swati said…
and i am still lost.nicely written dear!
Take care!
October 11, 2009 at 10:44 PM
HaRy!! said…
Thats a deep post!! I can see the pain if some one has to go thru something like this...nice write up..c ya around !

HaRy
October 12, 2009 at 4:11 AM
nazia said…
Thats very sensitive...


Joliieess:)
October 13, 2009 at 12:15 PM
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