THERE I COULD..................................


Beneath the soil,
Deep down,
Blue colored water,
Water bubbles,
Pouring out,
The yellow sunset,
Silver lined clouds,
Had that way,
Mind planned,
Catch hold you,
Down that steady lane,
Running unto,
Breathe holding up,
Following the fantasm,
Through the mirror,
Hazel eyes,
On the bench of world,
Narrow alleys,
Looked beyond,
The enshroud identity,
Those dark and musky nights,
Intervening the path,
Still forward for you,
Gazing lights of stars,
Enlighten way,
Following those unheard steps,
Had still the hope growing,
Can find the complete world,
Just a look back,
Was quite enough,
That unnamed individuality,
But the fragrance,
Made my follow up,
Reliance was inviolable,
To endure me through and through,
That wavy, spiritual world……….
Conceptualized me your dignified manner…….

Comments

Pramoda Meduri said…
hey..happy diwali..

and ya ..nice form of poetry..and wonderful usage of words..
tell me some tips to write such ones yaa plz..
:) ..enjoy..
Rikkij said…
A maze of short narrow halls that lead to an explosion of harmony. I like the "but the fragrance" line best. don't know why. ~rick
Syed said…
I really do love how you describe the scenery, it is wonderful!
V. Archana said…
what scenic beauty :)
Yellow Tulip said…
happy dewali :)...nice form of poetry dear:)..excellent imagination and use of words
Jack said…
Escapist,

Another good one. Looking forward for more and more.

Take care
Escapist said…
@ all...
Happy Dipawli to all....


Jolliiess:-)
Ritika said…
superb...

lookinh ahead to more...

smiless..:) :)

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