Few more steps.


Those few steps,
Ahead,
So made the miles difference,
Those few steps,
Too close to comfort,
Those few steps,
So the house is built again ,
Those few steps,
And the ashes were found,
Those few steps,
Waves looked rejoining,
Those few steps,
Area was flooded,
Those few steps,
The long life..

Comments

Andrea said…
Just a few steps at a time!
Great Poem..
Blessings, andrea
Escapist said…
@ Andrea --- thnkx.....

Jolliieess:)
Arnav said…
Nice :)
it is a few steps that make all the difference :)

Keep Writing and Smiling :)
Indrajit said…
tgat ws precisely done and ya a few steps do matter a lot.

:) keep goind.
Escapist said…
@ Arnav-----
Yes they matter when you get into it..



jolliiieess:)
Escapist said…
@ indrajit---yes they do....

Gud to c you here...


jolliieess:)
Raj said…
a few steps is what makes you the sky and me the earth. fictitiously, heaven and hell.
Escapist said…
@ Raj--- yes...anything cam change..just in few steps.

joolliieess:)
Tomz said…
it seems that you have briefed the story of humanity in a few lines..
Escapist said…
@ Tomz i tried to ,but ther are so many steps yet to define...



jolliieesss)
Grant-Grey Guda said…
This is truly fantastic!

बहुत बढ़िया मैं इसे प्यार करता था!

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