Orginal

That through and through relation,

Your expressions are back,
which was lane down,

Your cheeriness triggering by your eyes,
Was some thing,i tried to chase for..

That happy smile on your face,
Will never forget to find that back..

Harboring hands on my shoulder,
I was marveling for that feeling ever.

My home was haunting,
until you stepped in...


Now you are back into my life,
I am my original,
Wont let you move easily ,
You are one for whom i crave ever,
My ego is choked,
Wont let you my home ever now,
Please don't think of that now....


I am my original,
Will comfort you ever !
Will love you ever !!

Comments

Lauralee Beth said…
That's such a great picture and a great poem. Hello, I'm just checking out new blogs and found yours and really like it. Feel free to come check out mine.
July 22, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Kay said…
sufficated with love, desire, need of the other, very powerful
July 22, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Arv said…
:)

emotionally packed poetry :)

take care... cheers...
July 22, 2009 at 9:19 PM
Anonymous said…
**Silently pausing for a while to introspect**

What can I say? Wonderful!!! Loved the hyped affection in the sweet verses..

Intense and yet so real..Beautiful!

Keep writing, this was woven amazingly!!
July 23, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Escapist said…
@ Lee Beth ! Pleasure z all mine,will def go through yur note as well.

@ Fiducia A wonderful note of thnkx..looove



joliiieess:-)
July 23, 2009 at 11:07 AM
khaye said…
very nice writing it is very strong...keep it up...
khaye=)
July 23, 2009 at 11:36 PM
Syed said…
How beautiful :) Lovely post dear.
July 24, 2009 at 4:53 AM
AsianCajuns said…
Thanks so much for stopping by our blog! Your poem is beautiful!
July 24, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

kuch kehna chahti hou Aur kuch sunna Jiss kehki shah mien hou Aur kafiyat mien Woh sab mahsoos bhi karna chahti hou kuch app nai hain aur kuch parayain Un sab ko bhol jana chahti hou yain jho sansanahat hain Iss ko mahsoos bhi karna chahti hou Jho hoie na appnai Unko boul jana chahti hou Jis sai hum kehtai hain apna Unko saamait kar app nai pass bhi rakh na chahti hou Jin lougo nai ansoo diya Unko rula kar behna chahti hou Jis nai thami meri ahat Unko app nai rang mien rakh na chahti hou Kuch badlai hum is qadar Ki har woh lamha bulna chahti hou Baas us din ka hain intezar jaha kisi ki bahou mien mitt jana chahti hou !
Read more
Image
That single caresses,  those twinkling eyes and the glittering  ones,a smile on those tiny lips ,  those red cheeks spreading redness , eyes speak the depth of love in it , the shiny teeth and the peace , small beautiful nose takes away all the grin , that warmth in her hug , and the coziness beyond the feel,  those tiny fingers cross through the mind, a beautiful baby in it , a word of peaceful life , My Kids!!!!!!
Read more

An underlying truth

If you can breathe , Means you are exuberant , If you can’t feel, Means you are backwood, If you can walk, Means you are sturdy, If you don’t have hands to hold, Means you are frozen, If you get hurt, Means your body can retaliate , If you can’t love, Means your heart is over, If you have kids, Means u have family, If you don’t have time for them, Means you have nothing, If you have a life , Means you are living , If you have an ego, Means you are insubstantial . ~NM
Read more